Wednesday, June 23, 2010

Natures forces experiment

We did sand storm as our expirement we dug it into the sound then we trow loads of sand at it. It didn't break or let any sand in. So me and grace were successful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PI Matrix

Personal Investigations
Assessment Matrix
Term 1
Expert
 Shows weeks of work
Audience is very interested
 I've done the work myself
Research in my words – with my personality in it
 Contains humour(?)
Interaction with the audience
Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression

Practititioner
Shows three or four weeks of work
Contains pictures and steps
 Information is interesting and in my own words
Adults have supported me without doing work for me
Some humour
 Some interaction
 Audience is attentive
 Speech is clear

Apprentice
 Shows about a week’s work
 A little information – some in my own words
 Adults have done some of it for me
 No interaction with the audience
 No humour
 Poor presentation
 Few pictures

Novice
 Reads the words on the PowerPoint or Glog
Clearly started at the last minute
 Hardly any info
 Parents have done a lot of it for me
 No pictures or steps
 Copied straight off the internet
 No humour
 Not finished on time
 Untidy presentation
 Speech is not very clear

I think I did well at getting the audience intrested.
I learnt that you've got to take time.

Tuesday, June 22, 2010

The Firery Street

As I run across the colourful leaves at the bottom of my drive way. The street is empty apart from me. Crunch they crackle under my feet, I love autumn it has an air of freedom and peace. I lye down upon the firery carpet of leaves and look up into the branches of the firery trees I feel like there is nothing in the world but the tree and I. it is so peaceful here I breath in deeply the air feels damp, fresh and crisp. A light breeze blows across the street picking up leaves and dropping them again.
I picked up a leave it is a deep chocolaty brown. It feels as rough as sand paper I turned it over in my hand this side is as smooth as a white board I think.
I get up and run across the street "Yipy" I shout I feel at home here. I feel safe here in autumn it's so peaceful.

Sunday, June 20, 2010

Visual language

I choose this poem because it looks real and the gumboots are cool.